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Chapter 3
Madness and Desire


Morning  creaks at Mr. Evans Asylum filled with the deragned and insane minds of England. At one would enjoy the glorious morning, if someone's deranged and crazy laughter didn't give them chills. "Come on now Renfield, calm yourself down. You are making the other patients here on edge," says Refield's watcher Patchen, trying to calm Refield down. Refield jumping around like young child doing a tea party.


"The master has come, the master is here, the master takes his new found meal," sings Refield putting a few flies on a plate before twiliring around a few times with a pure smile that would give even a baby cry. "The meal's so fresh, the meal's so sweet, the meal's what everyone would seek," he continues, not paying attention to Patchen. "Go call for Mr. Evans and Dr. Seward, tell him Refield is going looneier then he usually is!" Patchen shouted at a nurse that was nearby. The nurse runs as fast as she could to get them. "Two more nights soon to pass, the master will surely furfill his quest, dear, dear Maggie will soon be mad just like me. Mad as mad when the devil arrives they all will sucome!" he sang sounding more wild then before.  "Shut up, you old fly eater! Your making everyone crazy!" shouted Patchen.


"Crosses, garlic, and wolfsbane will not protect you night or day. Nothing can help you, the curse will remain. From such delicious and glorious pain will make you the master's slave. He chooses who lives and who dies, soon he will come to claim his one and only prize," he continues ignoring Patchen again. Two orderlees suddenly come in and grab Renfield, trying to chain him up on the wall. "You can shakel me, you can chain me, but you'll never take the blood that I will receive, for the blood is the life and I will soon be free!" Renfield laughs after the orderlees leave and wait for Mr. Evans to appear.


Mr. Evans and Jack stood before Renfield, Mr. Evans was wearing his reading glasses he wrote all that Refield was raving of earlier. "Well Renfield," said Mr. Evans as he finished writing and put his pencil down. "I would like to know who this master is you speak of?" he asked Renfield. Renfield looks over at the bared window in his room looking at the sunlight spilling in the room. "The sun has risen but it won't last, for when the moon takes it's place there will be deadly terror to face. For soon the master will rize and you will say your good byes', he will take and make a new undead breed that will feed, and feed as he claims his bride to be," says Renfield looking at Mr. Evans  and Jack wide eyed showing that he has gone truly mad. "'We'll take that under consideration Mr. Renfield," says Mr. Evans  as he and Jack headed towards the door knowing asking him anything will be a waist of time. "I warn you Mr. Evans, send me away or else face the conciquences!" shouts Renfield before Mr. Evans and Jack went through the door.


Mina woke up as the sun rised and felt some how normal which pleased her greatly, but some how she felt something was wrong this morning. "I swear I heard a wolf howling before I went to sleep…" Mina thought as she looked at the balcony doors. As Mina was getting out of her bed she noticed something on her pillow beside where she lain…it was a freshly picked, beautiful red rose. "It is beautiful," she said as she picked up the flower and smelled it. The flower had a faint familiar scent that reminded Mina of the Count.


Then Mina remembered her sweet dream as she held the rose gently to her cheek. Smiling happily as she remembered how handsome he looked, like a prince in a fairy tale would meeting his princess. "The way he looked at me…it was like he desired me and wanted me to be there," Mina thought to herself. "And the way he danced with me in the mist and candle light…he held me so close, I could almost feel his heart beating," she  said to herself sighing like a young girl in love. "I felt so alive…I can't even forget his cheek against mine…oh and his voice when he sang along with the music that played!" Mina shivered and moaned as she thought of it. As Mina grasped the steam of the rose, missing the thorns on it, she felt a string attached to it, along with a small label. Mina examined the label and saw that it was a small note. "I wonder what it says…" says Mina reading the labeled note.


" 'I will always dream of you, my beautiful Mina. I will see you again soon.'
One who has you in his heart forever,
Count Vlad Dracula."


Mina felt her heart pound hevily as she finished reading the note. "He came to my room," Mina said to herself. "I must tell Maggie and Caroline about this!" squealed Mina as she ran out of her bed, put her night gown robe on, and nearly runs excited to Maggie's room.
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Here's chapter 3 in my dracula fanfic. I had a real fun time writing refield's ravings, though my mom had to help me out a bit on it. I name Refield's watcher Patchen after my great uncle Kennith Patchen, who was also a writer and an artist. I also loved writing out Mina's dream and her reactions. (hope you fan girls enjoy it!)

I hope you all will enjoy this one!
Send me comments and what you like about it.

Chapter 4 coming soon.
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~AnaxErik4ever May 31, 2011  Student Writer
*sigh* If I found a man had been in my room while I was asleep, I would probably be kind of freaked out. Although I've dreamed about Erik watching me fall asleep countless times, he's never remained for long. The same thing Jareth, Jack Skellington, and now Roxcula.
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:iconsexy-zexy:
I dreamed only of either one of the dark-hunters or were-hunters, Erik or Dracula doing me.
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~AnaxErik4ever May 31, 2011  Student Writer
Heh-heh-heh! Erik has done me a couple of times in my dreams too, but the "watching me fall asleep" dream has been more common.
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:iconsexy-zexy:
ahh. There was even one dream I had with him leading me through the catacombs.
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~AnaxErik4ever May 31, 2011  Student Writer
Yes! I've had that dream/day-dream a couple of times too. And of course, being an Emmy Rossum looks alike doesn't hurt either. Even if I imagine the wrong face, I still know it's me. Cool huh?
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:iconsexy-zexy:
Do you like her? I sort of am annoyied with her cause most of the films I see her in are mostly the same thing but in different time periods and not singing. (Why I am not liking Orlando bloom either.)
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~AnaxErik4ever Jun 1, 2011  Student Writer
I do like her. However, I have "lost touch" with her on the movie scene since Phantom. I now she's a successful recording artist, but I'd like it if she did a few more movies. She could be the next Jennifer Connelly if she wanted to. *knows that Ms. Connelly, now approaching 40, did her first movies when she was about 16, and that Emmy started working on Phantom when she was 16, an Easter egg shown on the gravestone at the end of the movie*
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:iconsexy-zexy:
I seen her in day after tomorrow, and the remake of the Poseidon adventure and then phantom. (Those are the only ones I seen her in. And I think I faved one of her songs she did on youtube. Can't remeber which one though....)
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!SugarSweetSally Apr 21, 2010   Digital Artist
i wish my vampire crush would be like that... -sighes-
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:iconsexy-zexy:
Hopefully many other fan girls that read this will think so too. You are mostly the only one that has read it so far.
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